Great tension, and I again loved that you flashed to Nicole in advance of revealing this side of the story, I found myself still picturing her there in the bed as you described her even while I was reading this, it all feels very connected, which I expect is one of those things that is much harder to do than it appears to be. I think I speak for…[Read more]

This is great and telling and real and there ARE those moments that they both momentarily slip out of “character” and acknowledge the vulnerability that undoubtedly would exist for both of them in this moment. I really enjoyed imagining myself ravaging and fucking Rachel as if I were him…it would be an incredibly heady moment!!!
-James

Holy hell. I had to stop reading and walk away after I read the words, ‘feed me your pussy’ omg, that was fantastic and just the right turn of just .. Umph, pure debauchery. I swear I was going to call it a night right there and just go jerk off but then I had to come back and keep reading. So hot, so, so hot. Alex is… well. I don’t know…[Read more]

I have the most devilish grin on my face right now after having read this…

I definitely like Alex’s style!
Whether that is having her walk around with her dress fully open under that coat, or constantly requiring Rachel to confirm/re-confirm her readiness/willingness/desire to taking the next step (also known as making her all but beg to be a…[Read more]