But I doubt I made you blush… yet.

You are a charmer, Luis. Maybe you should be the one to seduce Rachel. I am soliciting ideas. So, how would you do it? Or what do you want to read next?

Holy hell…

Yep, that is definitely working for me. I love the way you are flipping from each point of view and making every step an incredibly inventive erotic experience in and off itself.

I’d have to say steam not sauna cause things are certainly hot and wet over here!

I don’t want to give my ideas, because what you come up with is always better than what I am imagining! And the surprises and twists always floor me! But I’ll ramble for a bit and maybe you can take something from it.

I am totally into the progression of the story, but also very interested in understanding more of the motivations, desires,…[Read more]

My long overdue comments are quite simple. Well played…on many levels, from the awkwardness, to the directness of Alex in asking Rachel to “perform” certain acts for him which he knew (or strongly suspected) would have an immediate and undenyable affect on her arousal…to the start/stop full throttle/full brake abruptness that is a hallmark of the…[Read more]

Sorry about the format here, but when it is read here, the format is messy. For easier reading, go here: http://www.thesexexperiment.com/groups/erotic-collaborations/forum/topic/untitled-for-now/page/2/#post-4558

Ohhh My! I would like to respond with something intelligible, but after reading this, I can’t seem to focus on anything but the thought of Nicole staring at Rachel’s pretty pink pussy while she plays with herself and imagines being fucked by Alex…while she gets fucked by Alex…while Rachel is looking at her face and bodily reactions to being…[Read more]

I hope I included “Alex being taken over by lust, Alex fucking Nicole’s brains out, taking advantage of her arousal.”

This was in large part just virtual although it can powerful enough. I think of this as a baby step in the foreplay.

Lest we forget that sex is a drug…

Luis-
I think you have touched on something with your comment, but I would like to give it a slightly different spin…what I would like to believe is a responsible “dominant mans” view of pushing Nicole to meet Rachel. Apologies in advance to @Mal8899 for attempting to deconstruct her beautiful story in a way that may be less than tittilating,…[Read more]

Fair enough…you are absolutely correct. I guess the honesty partcomes into play when trying to MANAGE how to pursue those…well…primary…motivations!

See…I knew that my trying to analyze this story would miss a few marks…I guess the central question I would have for you Luis is about the differences in social attitudes and mores in…[Read more]

Well, the term “sexual colonialism” is just something I made up, so the fact that you had no idea what it meant has nothing to do with any language barrier, but I think that the rest of your response is very helpful in illustrating the concept that I was trying to put forth in using that term. Follow the heart and override oneself is an…[Read more]

@luis and @A.James, may I ask you gentlemen to use the Comment button instead Reply at this point because the truncated format is getting too difficult to read.

It occurs to me that when we watch movies we often do cheer for exactly this Luis, that the leads ‘should follow their hearts and mortify’. In movies we value and demand romance and courage, expression and passion.

But in real life, so often don’t we do the opposite? Value and encourage being in line, doing what is expected. Building…[Read more]

@alix-james, @luis, @lake : okay I will try to give everyone what they want.

I think what we want most is just for you to not to stop!! 🙂 Whichever way you go, I’m confident it will grip, and squeeze, tease, and please one way or another as it always does.

The subtle building tension for me in this one has me holding my breath. It feels like those moments in the theatre when you know something big is about to…[Read more]

Perhaps trust (
1.reliance on the integrity, strength, ability, surety, etc., of a person or thing; confidence.
2.confident expectation of something; hope.)

@luis you are too funny!

I have a feeling I know what the feeling was that Luis was feeling 🙂

I’m not sure I can handle all this pressure!

What do you want to be next?

I’m still sitting here picturing Nicole, naked wrapped in a towel with freshly stained lips on one of the benches at the locker room at the gym… Just within reach…

OMG and now I’m picturing me in the office, it’s been one of those days, it’s ten I’m still there, I never got out for lunch, have had maybe a handful of almonds all day… and she’s on my lap feeding me peekytoe crab, and its savory and warm and it starts to restore my being I am starting to feel like a human being again and I’m pissed I’ve spent…[Read more]

Whoa… Exciting… Challenging…

I should have known you would have twists in store for us…

Freshly returned from my vacation and cleaning out my “in” box full of so many “Daily Digest” updates, I have spent the better part of the afternoon getting (caught) up with your juicy little tale Mrs. Mallory. And let me say that, despite being exquisitely distracted over the past two weeks, I really have been missing your tail!!! Not only…[Read more]

Oh boy. I will do my best to keep you from stopping!

The enchantment continues, every installation full of its own special treats and leaving us hungry for more. I’m thinking we’re approaching a very, very interesting conversation between Nicole and Alex…

You definitely have a talent Ms M

Will we get her thoughts on Adam?

🙂

And like the Christmas cookies I hope they just keep coming. There is hope for my waistline though, cross country skiing today.

Ohh you want more story too, Luis? I am still eating cookies.

I’m with Luis. I think I’m finally sated on the cookies, but you and your delicate, sensual, incendiary aislings and appetites… Of these I suspect I shall never tire, but only lust for more.

You’re very kind, Luis, thank you.

@luis and @lake: okay, I guess I am off the Christmas cookies.

This was fantastic! I laughed, I cried, I touched myself (well two out of the three anyway). I found myself connecting to the characters in a deeper way, and loved getting the stronger sense of who they are and how they tick, it has really dawn me into the story even further. I was ecstatic when she said ‘of course he touched me, he’s a man…[Read more]

I’d be thinking along these lines:
Is she thinking of me?
What is she thinking of me?
Will she call me?
I wish I had done X?
She did enjoy that, right, yes yes, she did… Then flashing on every smile, every sign of enjoyment.

Then everything i can remember about how you felt, how you smelled, how you responded… Then what other things would…[Read more]

Hot and fun… The flash on his comment about her nails, brings it home how little things like that come around and all play into each other. I’ve always had penis envy… you are making it much worse.

I really enjoy those moments, those times, when you meet someone new and find a connection, an attraction… Go home with a big smile on your face and your mind reeling with possibility. This really captures that so well, makes it a very enjoyable read, has me get more invested in the characters.

Hmmm…seems a perfect compliment to my response to ms lakes three questions…sensuality and arousal definitely lie in the details…I am savoring every last one you have offered up here…THIS is how we let others inside…how we play and tease and challenge others to let themselves go…become fully present…the beginning of all the tiny…[Read more]

Please do keep this going, we are all caught up in the story now! It does make me wish you were closer (and not just for my usual reasons) I think we’d have fabulous conversations, there are so many ways we are similar, but at the same time different, the twists intrigue me to no end. I am so sure we would amuse each other 🙂

Well…you have certainly added a twist with this revelation…a naughty little insight into Alex and possibly into his relationship with Nicole…what’s it mean…what’s it say about him…about Nicole…how does that work (or not work) in strengthening their relationship? And what exactly is Nicole thinking about her polite but determined dinner…[Read more]